Tuesday, March 29, 2011
VS. poem
Florescent, fluffy, smiley face, pillow, bright pink VS. Emo, black hoody, chains, spikes, slit wrists
White, halos, wings, glowing, flying to the light, sky VS. Pointy horns, spike tail, trident, evil, fire powers
Heavy, explosive, timing, small or big, hard, damage VS. Fluffy, hit in face and won’t hurt, big, different colors, soft, super comfy
Rich, filling, brown, crumbly, hard, smooth, sweet, yummy VS. Smells good, taste good or bad, white icing, slippery, liquid
Un-dead, never dead, always living, never changing VS. Scared of death, always dying, growing really old.
"The Negro Speaks of Rivers"
This poem has a lot of imagery. “…I’ve seen its muddy bosom turn all golden in the sunset” It has a few metaphors. “Ancient, dusky rivers” and this poem is free verse all the way. It all fits very well but has no rhyming. It still has a flow so it all fits together though.
This poem is happy and has words that make you want to experience it. I have had the connection with rivers that some haven’t, so it seems that I understand and correspond with this poem and it brings memories.
Tuesday, March 22, 2011
Immortal
Catastrophic dreams
Small wonders
All souls
True love
Loving friendship
Mystical music
Judicious colors
Pleasant flow of waters
Never ending universe
Strong energy
Natural disasters
Radiation from Japan and Bananas
Murky illness
Inquisitive math
Disappointing plastic
Smelly nail polish
Gratifying humor
Collin, Chuck Norris
Conrad…will..die